The final cut
The challenge
The opening lacked a clear hook. The footage was usable, but the first few seconds needed a stronger reason for viewers to keep watching.
The approach
Every cut had to earn its place. I reshaped the opening, tightened the pacing around the voice, and used B-roll to support the story rather than simply fill the screen.
01
Problem
The opening took too long to get to the point.
Fix
Moved the strongest idea forward to give viewers a reason to stay.
02
Problem
B-roll felt decorative rather than purposeful.
Fix
Kept supporting shots only when they added context to the narration.
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